THREE STARS
This book was just okay. The story was good, but I wasn’t able to connect with any of the characters. I thought they were one-dimensional and I didn’t care about any of them.
I especially had problems with Niall. I thought he was self-centered, greedy, and a crappy father for not taking his daughter into consideration when he was going to marry a woman for her land and for political gain. He thought he was doing it to better the family. No, he wasn’t. He was in it for personal gain. No other reason. I saw right through him.
Kate was on her way to California via Arizona to take a job as a teacher when she’s in a stagecoach wreck and loses her memory. Niall rescued her and took her to his family home where he lived with two of his brothers, his aunt, and his daughter. She wore a wedding ring, so thought she was married and soon discovered she could ride a horse well and was able to teach Niall’s daughter some things she would learn in a schoolroom.
I had a big problem with Niall getting with her. He’s a widower and keeps a mistress in town whom he visits every Friday and not for just conversation. He stays in town all day on Saturday, comes home for dinner on Saturday night, then goes for Sunday dinner with this dreadful woman he intends to marry whom his daughter hates and she hates his daughter. But he thinks Kate is pretty and shows up in her room one night after everybody else has gone to bed. He tells her he will never love her, disregards that she may be married, doesn’t care that she is suffering from amnesia, and has sex with her. As far as I was concerned, she was mentally incapacitated and he took advantage of her. I hated him for that, even if she did give her consent. I didn’t like him before because I thought he was mean to her and after he had sex with her, I loathed him and he never made a comeback.
Then Kate turns into a martyr to the point where I thought she was an idiot. I liked her well enough to that point. After that, I didn’t care about her, either.
I didn’t feel the two of them falling in love. There was no chemistry. I was hoping for some sort of interaction between Niall and his daughter. We got a short bit of him taking her to Jocelyn’s house for Sunday dinner and him defending her when Jocelyn wanted to discipline her. I was surprised he did that. It wasn’t going to benefit him.
There were a couple instances of wrong word usage (main instead of mane, imaging instead of imagining) that weren’t serious enough to take away from the reading experience. But Niall ruined this story for me and soured me on the series.
Many will love this book. It just wasn’t for me.